My current authors are Italian; their English is good, mostly, apart from a few confusions and some non-idiomatic language.  For instance, the Ethernet standard

‘plays the flower of the party role in this realm’,

This is where you suggest an alternative, and are very extremely pleased that your alternative is one that the author likes.  Perhaps I should open it up to a competition?  (Remember, it’s just for fun: the prize is you get to feel smug.)